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2 April 2014
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To practice lyric-writing, I’ll sometimes add new verses to some of my favourite songs. It may be blasphemous to certain fans, but I enjoy it. Here’s a new verse to Hey Jude :
Hey Jude , don’t break my heart
Won’t you find her, and don’t forget her
Remember to let her into your mind
Then you will find you’ll make it better.
4.35pm
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18 March 2013
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do me love oh, whoa
do me love,oh ,Whoa
do me love,Yeah
do me love,Whoa
do me love,please So
true be always ll’I
you love I know You
do me love,Love
do me love,Whoa
do me love,please So
true be always ll’I
you love I know You
do me love,Love
love to Someone
you like Someone
new Somebody
love to Someone
do me love,Whoa
do me love,please So
true be always ll’I
you love I know You
do me love love
do me love,
do me love please So
true be always ll’I
you love I know You
do me love,love
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"Stop throwing jelly beans at me"- George Harrison
4.49pm
2 April 2014
Offline A Day In The Life , my full version:
I read the news today, oh boy
About a lucky man who made the grade
And though the news was rather sad
Well I just had to laugh
I saw the photograph
He blew his mind out in a car
He didn’t notice that the lights had changed
A crowd of people stood and stared
They’d seen his face before
Nobody was really sure if he was from the House of Lords
I saw a film today, oh boy
The English army had just won the war
A crowd of people turned away
But I just had to look
Having read the book
I’d love to turn you on
[crescendo]
Woke up, fell out of bed, dragged a comb across my head
Found my way downstairs and drank a cup
And looking up, I noticed I was late
Found my coat, grabbed my hat, made the bus in seconds flat
Found my way upstairs and had a smoke
And somebody spoke and I went into a dream
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (x2)
I read the news today, oh boy
About a man who’d wiped his face away
He left his kids and left his wife
To start another life
Away from all the strife
He said a free man should be free
So he packed up and fled the country
He left his family distraught
No battles to be fought
Nobody could tell if he was still the same man anymore
I heard a song today, oh boy
About a broken soul who stood alone
He watched the sunset from the edge
Looked from the dying light
To the endless night
I’d love to turn you on
[crescendo]
Woke up, climbed off the bus, made the station in a rush
Found my way around the passengers
And climbed aboard and sondered on the way
Pushed off, pulled away, and made today the day
Where I’d wear a mask and learn to smile
But I knew they’d see my tired eyes
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (x2)
I read the news today, oh boy
About a lonely man who’d found his grave
His house was lit up in a blaze
His mind was caught up in the haze
Nobody noticed him for days
His life was broken at sunrise
He only noticed when his fuel tank burst
He had no time to run away
And had no signs of life
Half a broken picture, charred and burnt, of his only wife
I found a love today, oh boy
We both looked back and then we locked our eyes
But a crowd of people blocked our gaze
Maybe I’ll see one day, just show me the way
I’d love to turn you on
[crescendo]
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (x4)
I read the news today, oh boy
Four-thousand holes in Blackburn, Lancashire
And though the holes were rather small
They had to count them all
Now they know how many holes it takes to fill the Albert Hall
Well I just had to lose
Having read the news
I’d love to turn you on
[crescendo]
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Mr. Kite, Beatlebug, WeepingAtlasCedars9.56pm
2 April 2014
Offline New I’m Only Sleeping chorus:
Please don’t bring me down,
I’m lost, you’re found
And in the end, I’m Only Sleeping
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1 January 2017
Offline I’ve told you ’bout the day in the life, now
It ended quickly but begins here tonight, now
Well there’s another girl you can find
Just expand your mind
Twistin’ on the Isle of Man, yeah
Shoutin’ when you’re having fun
Awaiting on the Glass Onion …
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2017:
8.45pm
9 March 2017
Offline I’m going to rewrite songs so they’re about the specific guitar models that were used on that song:
Let’s start, or should I say Strat, with Nowhere Man :
“Fender Strat”
Verse 1:
He’s a real Fender Strat
Sitting in his guitar bag
Coming through his Fender amp for George today
5 note guitar lick
Verse 2:
Stratocasters point to cue
Knows not that he’s sonic blue
Isn’t John’s acoustic Gibson weak?
5 note guitar lick
Chorus 1:
Fender Strat, he’s plugged in
You will know what you’re hearing
Fender Strat, the frets are at my command
Verse 3:
He’s as shy as he can be
Just seen when he wants to be
Fender Strat can we see you at all?
Guitar solo
Chorus 2:
Fender Strat, my Rocky
Taxmen cry, we’re shady
Leave it dark till George Harrison records Taxman
Verse 4:
Stratocasters point to cue
Knows not that he’s sonic blue
Isn’t John’s acoustic Gibson weak?
5 note guitar lick
Chorus 3:
Fender Strat, he’s plugged in
You will know what you’re hearing
Fender Strat, the frets are at my command
Verse 5:
He’s a real Fender Strat
Sitting in his guitar bag
Coming through his Fender amp for George today
Coming through his Fender amp for George today
Coming through his Fender amp for George today
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