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PWT – sorry @SgtPeppersBulldog 

https://schwarzewolke.bandcamp…..thing-blue will get you there

We did quite a good job, well done @Dark Overlord!

Dark Overlord said
Just finished listening and i must say that i enjoy this over your band’s work.

Anyways, i thought i’d briefly review every track:

Road Trip is a nice opener, reminiscent of Magical Mystery Tour , but a bit weak compared to the other tracks.

Living A Lie is a nice ballad and i like how you were able to throw a Cm in there even though the key is E.

Raspberry Jam is a great instrumental.

Half Flush Guy is a good disco-ish track.

Family Of Four is good but the middle section feels barren without my guitar orchestration.

Was very surprised to see Stalker, considering it was on my album in January but this time it’s without my additional guitar parts and while i’m glad this version isn’t a 1:1 copy of mine, i feel my guitar parts helped out, especially during verse 1 and 2.

Give Us Some Rock is good but i don’t like how the 1st solo is after the 1st chorus and the 2nd one is after the 3rd chorus, it comes off as a bit unsettling since after hearing the 1st solo, you’re expecting a solo after the 2nd chorus but instead you’re treated with another verse.

Working Title is probably the worst track on the album, but that’s not saying much considering most of the songs on here are great and i still like this song, just not as much as the other ones.

Little Chloe has a nice Baroque pop feel to it, which i really dig considering it reminds me of Fixing A Hole , a song i know both of us enjoy quite a bit.

X, Y, Z is good and has a good riff.

Synaesthesia has to be the best track on the album and i’m impressed with the reverse guitar solo, those things are a real PITA to record.

You Can’t Not Like The Music is a good closer but there are gaps where there’s no vocals or solo, making it feel barren.

Overall, it’s a pretty good album and i can’t wait to see what’s next.

  

Wow, thanks for the review! Some good thoughts there.

Interesting to see that while I like space in my songs, you find those sections barren.

Also, you can think our very own @50yearslate for inspiration for Synaesthesia.

QuarryMan said
I didn’t have time to hear the whole thing, but I listened to Synaesthesia and really liked it! The reverse guitar solo was really cool and I like how you took inspiration from one of our very own forum members

I’m glad you liked it! Inspiration happens at all sorts of moments, you gotta take it when it comes…

Damn, y’all are making me kick myself for not putting any effort into my own music

Do it. I can’t speak for other members but I do feel quite proud about some of my stuff, especially this one. 

You get out what you put in – and it’s great fun putting it in.

I’m the first to admit I’m rarely in tune even 80% of the time lol – brilliant is definitely not a word I’d use to describe my singing, but I’m glad the texture works.

The one thing I’ve found with people who ‘can’t learn a guitar’ (and I’m looking at myself here) is that they haven’t found the right inspiration. I wasn’t getting anywhere trying to learn chords, and trying to change between them. So I tried just playing Beatles songs to see if that worked, and it did. Try playing stuff you really, really like – it’ll take you a while to get it right. Then move onto other songs you like – don’t bother with anything you find boring. Eventually you’ll be a pro. But before that happens, you will have the ability to write stuff. Everyone has the ability to write songs, they may just not have the skills to unlock it yet.

/rant