6.52am
1 May 2010
I was wondering if anyone wanted to share a poem that meant something to them, or, if they may be so bold, to share something personally written. I’ve got a few kicking around that need a bit of polishing first but I really like some of the lines.
Shinkichi Takahashi (a Zen poet…really out there stuff)
A Wood in Sound
The pine tree sways in the smoke,
Which streams up and up.
There’s a wood in sound.
My legs lose themselves
Where the river mirrors daffodils
Like faces in a dream.
A cold wind and the white memory
Of a sasanqua.
Warm rain comes and goes.
I’ll wait calmly on the bank
Till the water clears
And willows start to bud.
Time is singed on the debris
Of air raids.
Somehow, here and now, I am another.
I absolutely love some of those lines, I’m trying to write a song based around faces in a dream. The white memory of a sasanqua, oh so good!
I really would love to hear other poems so please share!
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I sat on a rug, biding my time, drinking her wine
1.08pm
10 May 2011
I'm trying to write poetry like Morrison, but can't.
HELP HERE…….
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One and one don't make two
One and one make one.
3.15pm
1 May 2010
I wasn't that much into poetry until I read http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/F…..ndo_Pessoa
Love is a Company. (El amor es una compañia)
I enjoy Love's company
I don't know how to walk the roads alone
because I can't walk by myself
A visible thought makes me walk faster
and see less, and at the same time, makes me like even more when I see all
even his absense is a thing that's with me
and I like hm so much that I don't know how to want him
If I don't see him, I imagine him and I'm strong like tall trees
but if I see him, I tremble, I don't know what I have done with my feelings in his absence.
everything I am and all my strength abandones me
All the reality looks at me like a sunflower with his face in the middle
The happy sun is shining
The happy sun is shining
The fields are green and gay,
But my poor heart is pining
For something far away.
It's pining just for you,
It's pining for thy kiss.
It does not matter if you're true
To this.
What matter is just you.
I now the sea is beaming
Under the summer sun.
I know the waves are gleaming,
Each one and every one.
But I am far from you,
And so far from your kiss!
And that's all I get that's really true
In this.
What matters is just you.
Oh, yes, the sky is splendid,
So blue as it now,
The air and light are blended,
Oh yes, hot, anyhow,
Nothing of this is you
I'm absent from your kiss,
That's all I get that's sad and true
In this
What matter is just you.
If you can read his work I strongly recommend it. His masterpiece is The Book of Disquiet, I just got it and I'm going to read it next week.
Another poet I read when I was in school was Sor Juana Ines de la Cruz, proudly Mexican and one of the first feminist writers. I hate it her in those days but I’m reading again her work and it’s fantastic. In my wish book list there are books written by Elizabeth Barrett Browning and Robert Browning.
Edit: Another poet I have read just one book and I love is Wislawa Szymborska. She won the Nobel Prize in 1996 and her poem Love at First Sight was Kryztoff Kieslowski inspiration for his movie Three Colors : Red.
Here's the poem in this link.
Here comes the sun….. Scoobie-doobie……
Something in the way she moves…..attracts me like a cauliflower…
Bop. Bop, cat bop. Go, Johnny, Go.
Beware of Darkness…
4.30pm
19 September 2010
Old reliable Shakespeare here: Sonnet 130
My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun;
Coral is far more red than her lips' red ;
If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun;
If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head.
I have seen roses damask, red and white,
But no such roses see I in her cheeks;
And in some perfumes is there more delight
Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks.
I love to hear her speak, yet well I know
That music hath a far more pleasing sound;
I grant I never saw a goddess go;
My mistress, when she walks, treads on the ground:
And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare
As any she belied with false compare.
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'When the fall's all that's left, it matters a great deal.
6.46pm
7 November 2010
9.38pm
4 December 2010
'Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe
All mimsy were the borogroves
And the mome wraths outgrabe.
“Beware the Jabberwock my son!
The jaws that bite, the claws that catch!
Beware the Jubjub bird, and shun
The Frumious Bandersnatch!”
He took his vorporal sword in hand,
Long time the Maxome Foe he sought
So he rested by the Tum-Tum Tree
And stood a while he thought.
And as in uffish thought he stood
The Jabberwock, with eyes of flame,
Came whiffling through the tulgy wood
And burbled as it came.
One two! One two! And through and through!
The vorporal blade went snicker-snack!
He left it dead, and with its head
He went galumphing back.
“And hast thou slain the Jabberwock?
Come to my arms, my beamish boy!
Oh frabjous day! Calooh! Callay!”
He chortled in his joy.
'Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe
All mimsy were the borogroves
And the mome wraths outgrabe.
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10.23pm
7 November 2010
“You are old, Father William,” the young man said,
“And your hair has become very white;
And yet you incessantly stand on your head—
Do you think, at your age, it is right?”
“In my youth,” Father William replied to his son,
“I feared it might injure the brain;
But now that I'm perfectly sure I have none,
Why, I do it again and again.”
“You are old,” said the youth, “As I mentioned before,
And have grown most uncommonly fat;
Yet you turned a back-somersault in at the door—
Pray, what is the reason of that?”
“In my youth,” said the sage, as he shook his grey locks,
“I kept all my limbs very supple
By the use of this ointment—one shilling the box—
Allow me to sell you a couple?”
“You are old,” said the youth, “And your jaws are too weak
For anything tougher than suet;
Yet you finished the goose, with the bones and the beak—
Pray, how did you manage to do it?”
“In my youth,” said his father, “I took to the law,
And argued each case with my wife;
And the muscular strength which it gave to my jaw,
Has lasted the rest of my life.”
“You are old,” said the youth, “one would hardly suppose
That your eye was as steady as ever;
Yet you balanced an eel on the end of your nose—
What made you so awfully clever?”
“I have answered three questions, and that is enough,”
Said his father; “don't give yourself airs!
Do you think I can listen all day to such stuff?
Be off, or I'll kick you down stairs!”
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11.36pm
1 May 2010
Awesome, mith I have one of Fernando’s books of selected poems on the way.
I work in a library and when kids will ask for a recommendation I always send them to Through the Looking Glass. Even reading it now I’m still shocked by how much imagination is present it that book.
Knowledge arised;
The sun, the moon, the stars.
Solemly silent, the world lost
to those who don’t hear.
Shades of blue, illuminating streaks
running through my core.
And here I stand,
A wisdom renewed.
I sat on a rug, biding my time, drinking her wine
11.53pm
7 November 2010
GniknuS said:
I work in a library and when kids will ask for a recommendation I always send them to Through the Looking Glass. Even reading it now I'm still shocked by how much imagination is present it that book
Yeah definitely, I've probably read both the Alice books more than any other book in my life, and they're still as enjoyable to read now as they were the first time. They're just so timeless as well.
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1.18am
Reviewers
14 April 2010
I'm a sucker for Poe (elementary penguin be damned!).
Over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore,
While I nodded, nearly napping, suddenly there came a tapping,
As of some one gently rapping, rapping at my chamber door.
`'Tis some visitor,' I muttered, `tapping at my chamber door –
Only this, and nothing more.'
Ah, distinctly I remember it was in the bleak December,
And each separate dying ember wrought its ghost upon the floor.
Eagerly I wished the morrow; – vainly I had sought to borrow
From my books surcease of sorrow – sorrow for the lost Lenore –
For the rare and radiant maiden whom the angels named Lenore –
Nameless here for evermore.
And the silken sad uncertain rustling of each purple curtain
Thrilled me – filled me with fantastic terrors never felt before;
So that now, to still the beating of my heart, I stood repeating
`'Tis some visitor entreating entrance at my chamber door –
Some late visitor entreating entrance at my chamber door; –
This it is, and nothing more,'
Presently my soul grew stronger; hesitating then no longer,
`Sir,' said I, `or Madam, truly your forgiveness I implore;
But the fact is I was napping, and so gently you came rapping,
And so faintly you came tapping, tapping at my chamber door,
That I scarce was sure I heard you' – here I opened wide the door; –
Darkness there, and nothing more.
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before;
But the silence was unbroken, and the darkness gave no token,
And the only word there spoken was the whispered word, `Lenore!'
This I whispered, and an echo murmured back the word, `Lenore!'
Merely this and nothing more.
Back into the chamber turning, all my soul within me burning,
Soon again I heard a tapping somewhat louder than before.
`Surely,' said I, `surely that is something at my window lattice;
Let me see then, what thereat is, and this mystery explore –
Let my heart be still a moment and this mystery explore; –
'Tis the wind and nothing more!'
Open here I flung the shutter, when, with many a flirt and flutter,
In there stepped a stately raven of the saintly days of yore.
Not the least obeisance made he; not a minute stopped or stayed he;
But, with mien of lord or lady, perched above my chamber door –
Perched upon a bust of Pallas just above my chamber door –
Perched, and sat, and nothing more.
Then this ebony bird beguiling my sad fancy into smiling,
By the grave and stern decorum of the countenance it wore,
`Though thy crest be shorn and shaven, thou,' I said, `art sure no craven.
Ghastly grim and ancient raven wandering from the nightly shore –
Tell me what thy lordly name is on the Night's Plutonian shore!'
Quoth the raven, `Nevermore.'
Much I marvelled this ungainly fowl to hear discourse so plainly,
Though its answer little meaning – little relevancy bore;
For we cannot help agreeing that no living human being
Ever yet was blessed with seeing bird above his chamber door –
Bird or beast above the sculptured bust above his chamber door,
With such name as `Nevermore.'
But the raven, sitting lonely on the placid bust, spoke only,
That one word, as if his soul in that one word he did outpour.
Nothing further then he uttered – not a feather then he fluttered –
Till I scarcely more than muttered `Other friends have flown before –
On the morrow he will leave me, as my hopes have flown before.'
Then the bird said, `Nevermore.'
Startled at the stillness broken by reply so aptly spoken,
`Doubtless,' said I, `what it utters is its only stock and store,
Caught from some unhappy master whom unmerciful disaster
Followed fast and followed faster till his songs one burden bore –
Till the dirges of his hope that melancholy burden bore
Of “Never-nevermore.”'
But the raven still beguiling all my sad soul into smiling,
Straight I wheeled a cushioned seat in front of bird and bust and door;
Then, upon the velvet sinking, I betook myself to linking
Fancy unto fancy, thinking what this ominous bird of yore –
What this grim, ungainly, ghastly, gaunt, and ominous bird of yore
Meant in croaking `Nevermore.'
This I sat engaged in guessing, but no syllable expressing
To the fowl whose fiery eyes now burned into my bosom's core;
This and more I sat divining, with my head at ease reclining
On the cushion's velvet lining that the lamp-light gloated o'er,
But whose velvet violet lining with the lamp-light gloating o'er,
She shall press, ah, nevermore!
Then, methought, the air grew denser, perfumed from an unseen censer
Swung by Seraphim whose foot-falls tinkled on the tufted floor.
`Wretch,' I cried, `thy God hath lent thee – by these angels he has sent thee
Respite – respite and nepenthe from thy memories of Lenore!
Quaff, oh quaff this kind nepenthe, and forget this lost Lenore!'
Quoth the raven, `Nevermore.'
`Prophet!' said I, `thing of evil! – prophet still, if bird or devil! –
Whether tempter sent, or whether tempest tossed thee here ashore,
Desolate yet all undaunted, on this desert land enchanted –
On this home by horror haunted – tell me truly, I implore –
Is there – is there balm in Gilead? – tell me – tell me, I implore!'
Quoth the raven, `Nevermore.'
`Prophet!' said I, `thing of evil! – prophet still, if bird or devil!
By that Heaven that bends above us – by that God we both adore –
Tell this soul with sorrow laden if, within the distant Aidenn,
It shall clasp a sainted maiden whom the angels named Lenore –
Clasp a rare and radiant maiden, whom the angels named Lenore?'
Quoth the raven, `Nevermore.'
`Be that word our sign of parting, bird or fiend!' I shrieked upstarting –
`Get thee back into the tempest and the Night's Plutonian shore!
Leave no black plume as a token of that lie thy soul hath spoken!
Leave my loneliness unbroken! – quit the bust above my door!
Take thy beak from out my heart, and take thy form from off my door!'
Quoth the raven, `Nevermore.'
And the raven, never flitting, still is sitting, still is sitting
On the pallid bust of Pallas just above my chamber door;
And his eyes have all the seeming of a demon's that is dreaming,
And the lamp-light o'er him streaming throws his shadow on the floor;
And my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floor
Shall be lifted – nevermore!
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OudisTo the fountain of perpetual mirth, let it roll for all its worth. And all the children boogie.
3.50am
1 May 2010
4.17am
4 December 2010
When The Light Appears by Allen Ginsberg
You’ll bare your bones you’ll grow you’ll pray you’ll only know
When the light appears, boy, when the light appears
You’ll sing & you’ll love you’ll praise blue heavens above
When the light appears, boy, when the light appears
You’ll whimper & you’ll cry you’ll get yourself sick and sigh
You’ll sleep & you’ll dream you’ll only know what you mean
When the light appears, boy, when the light appears
You’ll come & you’ll go, you’ll wander to and fro
You’ll go home in despair you’ll wonder why’d you care
You’ll stammer & you’ll lie you’ll ask everybody why
You’ll cough and you’ll pout you’ll kick your toe with gout
You’ll jump you’ll shout you’ll knock you’re friends about
You’ll bawl and you’ll deny & announce your eyes are dry
You’ll roll and you’ll rock you’ll show your big hard cock
You’ll love and you’ll grieve & one day you’ll come believe
As you whistle & you smile the lord made you worthwhile
You’ll preach and you’ll glide on the pulpit in your pride
Sneak & slide across the stage like a river in high tide
You’ll come fast or come on slow just the same you’ll never know
When the light appears, boy, when the light appears
Well we all shine on like the moon, the stars, and the sun.
9.48am
22 September 2010
Zig said:
I’m a sucker for Poe (elementary penguin be damned!).
The RavenOnce upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered weak and weary,
Over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore,
While I nodded, nearly napping, suddenly there came a tapping,
As of some one gently rapping, rapping at my chamber door.
`’Tis some visitor,’ I muttered, `tapping at my chamber door –
Only this, and nothing more.’Oh Zig!! I absolutely love this poem, studied it in school long long time ago, and every time I listen to “I Am The Walrus “, I remember it and fall in love with the song a little bit more 🙂But the poem I really really like is Robert Frost‘s The Road Not Taken. It just rings so true.Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth.
Then took the other, as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim,
Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
Though as for that the passing there
Had worn them really about the same.And both that morning equally lay
In leaves no step had trodden black.
Oh, I kept the first for another day!
Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
I doubted if I should ever come back.I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I–
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.My favourite poet is Mahmoud Darwish, a Palestinian poet whose works are translated into many languages. His death – not so long ago – was a tremendous loss..
Do I have to keep on talking till I can't go on!
11.24am
Reviewers
14 April 2010
Love the Frost poem, UFC. It reminds me of the time my wife and I went hiking along the rim of the Grand Canyon. We first looked at the well-worn trail, then the not so worn. True to the poem you posted, we took the less travelled and ended up having one of the best days we can remember. We still talk about it to this day.
Now, I will have that poem to add to the stories. Thanks!
To the fountain of perpetual mirth, let it roll for all its worth. And all the children boogie.
11.49am
10 May 2011
Woman in Red (still in progress)
Woman in Red
Yes, She's the Woman in Red
Woman in Red
Yes, She's the Woman in Red
She's always asking you
'What The Heck Is A Bed?'
She keeps you down
You wanna go up
If you try to argue with her
she will go stuck
She don't have a cup
only hand
She's the queen of losers
but always command
Woman in Red
Yes, She's the Woman in Red
Woman in Red
Yes, She's the Woman in Red
She don't have car
so she goes to work with a dog-sled
Always on the run
She having no fun
Always serious
Still is anxious
She hikes day and night
Has to be polite
She's no good woman
Beacause she's belgian
Woman in Red
Yes, She's the Woman in Red
Woman in Red
Yes, She's the Woman in Red
She's so fast
She's always ahead
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One and one don't make two
One and one make one.
2.29pm
19 September 2010
More Robert Frost:
Nature's first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold.
Her early leaf's a flower;
But only so an hour.
Then leaf subsides to leaf.
So Eden sank to grief,
So dawn goes down to day.
Nothing gold can stay.
As if it matters how a man falls down.'
'When the fall's all that's left, it matters a great deal.
11.16am
4 December 2010
If you can keep your head when all about you
Are losing theirs and blaming it on you,
If you can trust yourself when all men doubt you,
But make allowance for their doubting too;
If you can wait and not be tired by waiting,
Or being lied about, don't deal in lies,
Or being hated, don't give way to hating,
And yet don't look too good, nor talk too wise:
If you can dream – and not make dreams your master;
If you can think – and not make thoughts your aim;
If you can meet with Triumph and Disaster
And treat those two impostors just the same;
If you can bear to hear the truth you've spoken
Twisted by knaves to make a trap for fools,
Or watch the things you gave your life to, broken,
And stoop and build 'em up with worn-out tools:
If you can make one heap of all your winnings
And risk it on one turn of pitch-and-toss,
And lose, and start again at your beginnings
And never breathe a word about your loss;
If you can force your heart and nerve and sinew
To serve your turn long after they are gone,
And so hold on when there is nothing in you
Except the Will which says to them: 'Hold on!'
If you can talk with crowds and keep your virtue,
' Or walk with Kings – nor lose the common touch,
if neither foes nor loving friends can hurt you,
If all men count with you, but none too much;
If you can fill the unforgiving minute
With sixty seconds' worth of distance run,
Yours is the Earth and everything that's in it,
And – which is more – you'll be a Man, my son!
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3.18pm
1 May 2010
7.01pm
19 September 2010
Here’s one of mine.
The night quiet, the moon shining,
Everyone making no sound
A night so still and perfect
No trouble was found.
On this night, years ago,
I was walking alone
I met a man who said,
“You should have known”
I asked the man,
A wise man indeed,
“What should I have known?”
That your people are now freed!
What do you think?
As if it matters how a man falls down.'
'When the fall's all that's left, it matters a great deal.
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